Tuesday, December 6, 2016

"In-Class Writing" Responses

1. Help us understand Holden Caulfield. (Word Count: 474)

Holden Caulfield expresses a lot of different emotions in his life. Holden is still a teenager; he is learning about sex, smoking, alcohol, and he complains and rambles all the time like a teen. Holden wants to run away from New York and go somewhere completely different, a lot like how teens feel (although he has pretty reasonable reasoning behind this, he doesn’t want his parents to find out how much money he lost this weekend (all of it)). He flunks out of school and doesn’t seem to care way too much. Holden is also a pretty strange guy at times. He flunks out of school, yet still writes a composition for Stradlater, and “horses” around at weird times, a lot of the time in front of people, describing himself having a blast and them staring at him, dumbfounded or telling him to cut it out. When he isn’t horsing around and acting like an innocent twerp, he’s struggling over the decision of staying innocent or moving on and understanding adulthood. He is pretty scared of that thing; So many responsibilities! So much gray hair! So phony!
Holden imagines innocence as a field of rye, and a cliff represents becoming an adult. Holden says that he will be the “Catcher in the Rye”, and catch all the innocent children that would otherwise fall off the cliff, but also stay on the innocent side himself. If that’s what he wants to do, though, he is doing a horrible job at it. He smokes a ton, and Phoebe even points out while he’s with her that he’s a bad influence. But, Holden listens to Phoebe; he almost completely stops his smoking after talking with Phoebe; only smoking when offered a cigarette by his former teacher, Mr. Antolini. Mr. Antolini was one of Holden’s friends also, very much like Phoebe, and shares advice with him. Mr. Antolini tells him that he fears Holden’s death will be for nothing, or for an unworthy cause. Holden doesn’t exactly follow him, because he’s pretty tired, but you can tell he is really putting his mind into his words. But, when Mr. Antolini strokes Holden’s head, Holden immediately shouts out that Antolini had gone too far, and left. His somewhat exaggerated response here is seen throughout a lot of the book, exaggerating about basically every single amount of time or distance he calculates. He doesn’t know/care how long a mile is, he only cares about how long it feels.

Wow that was a lot longer than I thought it was. Well, In short,

Holden is a stereotypical angsty teen that horses around and struggles over the decision of shielding innocence or coming to understand the phony, real world. He has trouble talking to people and these people don’t listen to him anyways, and always create a negative atmosphere around him.

1. Choose a symbol in the text and discuss how it functions in The Catcher. (Word Count: 338)
Inside and outside of the Book, Movies have been one thing that Salinger was not a big fan of.
Heck, in the first paragraph of the book, Holden flat out says “If there's one thing I hate, it's the movies.”
Salinger has been resisting turning the book into a movie, and disliked the Idea of it being a play as well, due to the medium being unable to deliver the 1st person feeling that the book can give you. (The first thing I immediately thought after hearing this argument was “Why not make Catcher in the Rye in VR?”, but this is getting off topic.)
The main reason Holden seems to hate Movies and Actors is because they’re all phonies and snobs. He doesn’t describe it too well, but he says that they’re show-offs, and playing for the crowd. Old Ernie is a good example of this feeling Holden has; he put in crazy high and low notes to amaze the crowd, which Holden remarks would cheer at basically anything. But, again, I’m getting off topic.
Holden, instead of liking Movies, likes doing things just for fun. He “horses around,” gets a bang out of imitating movies (“I hate the movies like poison, but I get a bang imitating them.”), and feels happier after seeing a kid sing "If a body catch a body coming through the rye." At first, I thought he was just being a little creep, but after connecting the dots in class about phonies and becoming older and being exposed to the real world, we realize that Holden likes this song because the boy “was just singing for the hell of it,” and doing it out of pure fun rather than doing it as a job like D.B. in Hollywood.
Holden also complains a lot about Movie audiences. He says that a lot of people laugh at jokes that aren’t funny, and are completely sucked into movies sometimes without caring about the outside world (like their son that needs to use the bathroom).

What is meant by the last two sentences of the novel: "Don't ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you start missing everybody." (Word Count 314) 

There are a few sentences before this one that give it a bit more context:
“Anyway, one time… D.B. asked me what I thought about all this stuff I just finished telling you about. I didn't know what the hell to say. If you want to know the truth, I don't know what I think about it. I'm sorry I told so many people about it. About all I know is, I sort of miss everybody I told about. Even old Stradlater and Ackley, for instance. I think I even miss that goddam Maurice. It's funny. Don't ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you start missing everybody.”
Holden is saying that he misses everyone he told his story to. He even emphasizes that he misses the people he had previously hated. The last two sentences are told directly to the reader, referring to the reader as “you”, and are told as a piece of advice, that if you start to talk with someone and create a relationship with them, you’re going to miss them, or at least miss the people in your life in your past.
But throughout the book, does Holden really follow this advice? Holden had been yearning for people to talk to, looking through his phone book, and almost only has long conversations with people he’s met before or people. The people he missed the most were people like Jane and Allie; people he didn’t talk with during the book. It seems like Holden experiences almost the opposite of what he’s telling the reader to do; He tells you “Don’t ever tell anybody anything,” yet he pretty much talks to anyone that he can to let out all of his feelings and emotions. He’s saying that he missed Stradlater, Ackley, and Maurice, but he doesn’t seem to miss them at all. Who he really misses are Jane and Allie.

4. Choose your best dialectical entry from the novel. Transpose it to your blog (quote and "response").
‘I had the privilege of meeting your mother and dad when they had their little chat with Dr. Thurmer some weeks ago. They're grand people.’ ‘Yes, they are. They're very nice.’ Grand. There's a word I really hate. It's a phony. I could puke every time I hear it.”
(5 Salinger)
(Literary Analysis/Question)
What’s wrong with the word grand? Wouldn’t it be used to describe something good? Or would it be a word like ‘peculiar’ or ‘interesting’ which can describe both good and bad things? Why does Holden think the word Grand is phony?
(Clarify)
Ok, I can’t see anything online that implies Grand being more of a negative word than a positive word, but Holden seemes to see it in this negative way. Going through the book, basically every time “Grand” is mentioned, it’s with a “phony.” Here...
“"Yes--who is this?" she said. She was quite a little phony” (Salinger 57)
In response to going to matinees, she said “I’d love to. Grand.” (Salinger 57), and Holden almost decides not to go. This word was so deliberately used, it gets its own entire sentence. I guess it’s just to symbolize who’s “phony” and acting all fancy and using vocabulary like “grand” instead of something like “radical.”

Thursday, October 27, 2016

The Setting of Cat in the Rain and It's Meaning- Something You Didn't See that I Did

I know lots of people would want to make their blog posts on longer and deeper stories of Hemingway's like "The Short and Happy Life of Francis Macomber," with lots of things and parts to interpret, so I decided to stick with a shorter yet denser story of his, "Cat in the Rain."

One thing that piqued my interest was why the couple were at a hotel in Italy. In the Nick Adams stories we've read, Hemingway states that Nick Adams was wounded in Italy while on the battlefield fighting, just like Hemingway was in real life while fighting with the Red Cross.

And this seems to match up with "Cat in the Rain"; The story takes place during generally the same time, and there are people gathered around a war monument described towards the beginning of the story. Hemingway was probably making a subtle allusion to his experience in WWI.
But, "Cat in the Rain" has almost no relation to WWI. I don't think the setting of Italy was to discuss the war, but rather to just be a foreign location that Hemingway could write about, with his experience of being in Italy for WWI.

But, this still doesn't answer the question of why the couple were in this hotel.
My first impressions were that they were in the hotel for a vacation. The location described in the first 3 paragraphs made their hotel seem like a nice place, "facing the sea... public garden and the war monument." The biggest evidence to suggest this are the palm trees; they aren't native to Italy, and are very expensive trees to have, a symbol of art and money. They aren't just staying in some shabby run-down inn, they are in a relatively good hotel.

But, Hemingway didn't write this story about a happy vacation. No, it's raining outside! And this isn't the only reason it's a gloomy day; the entire square where people would normally be looking at the war monument was completely empty, except for a waiter by his cafe. This setting is comparable to the wife and husband's relationship. It should be and at one point probably was happy, but right now, it is unsettling, with conflicting ideas between the Husband and Wife, the Wife wanting to have more things and have fun, while the Husband wants her to stay the way she is, and is more placid. However, when the cat arrives, the wife gets her way, and the story ends. Maybe the Husband would continue to argue with his Wife, or maybe he would learn to understand the feelings she expressed in the short story. The rain can lead to a storm, but it can also clear, leaving an open, blue sky.

Thursday, October 20, 2016

6 6 Word Stories (Guest Starring: John Wu)


  1. What happens next will SHOCK you!
  2. Dreams of return are only dreams
  3. He’s inside, I’m not, smoking pot (made this one with John Wu)
  4. Drunk man found dead on porch
  5. But, she'd already packed her bags
  6. Donald Trump caught dancing with Putin

Friday, September 30, 2016

Proctor: Hero or Stooge?

I believe that Proctor was a hero. He did have some bad judgement and make some bad choices, but he was still a hero.
For example, when given the choice to admit to the Witch Trials, he said that he wouldn’t admit, because admitting would cause his family and friends to be dishonored and have a harder life. So, he died to keep his family's reputation and to keep his friends safe, something a hero would do. A hero would think about the wellbeing of others. He was a bit of a stooge though, because he thought that losing his life would be better than having a worse reputation amongst the down and lose his title. The Witchcraft frenzy was over, and most people probably wouldn’t think too much about it. He was thinking about himself as well.
He regretted committing adultery when he did, and admitted to the Court, Abigail, and even Elizabeth, and tried to apologize. He shouldn’t have committed adultery, and he realized that. He went back to his ideals and kept them until he died.
He made very big mistakes, and he had lots of flaws, but he tried his best to make it up, and to save his family and friends. That is what a true hero does.

Tuesday, September 13, 2016

Me

Hello, everyone my name is Ryan Newkirk, a Freshman Frackie at Whitney M. Young. Before I was at Whitney Young, I went to Abraham Lincoln Elementary for 6th grade, and Roslyn Road Elementary in the Suburbs. Abraham Lincoln School was a very crowded school, but was alright. It prepared me for the busy atmosphere in Whitney Young.

Things to know about me:
  • I am Half Chinese / Half 'MURICAN! My dad was American and my mom is Chinese. I am currently learning Chinese in school right now.
  • I have lots of trouble reading Chinese, but I can speak it very fluently and can understand some Chinese Dialects as well. (My mom is from Shanghai, they have a dialect there called "Shanghai-nese". They speak Chinese very differently.)
  • I like to do stuff with Computers, Coding, and Robotics. I got to a Robotics State Competition once! 
  • I want to learn how to draw better, write better, and I want to try and keep a journal/blog, get into the habit of writing more.
  • Although not being very athletic, I enjoy playing badminton, floor hockey, and I like swimming.
  • I want to be an Engineer when I grow up. (Or an Astronaut! I'm probably not physically capable of that kind of job though)
  • I enjoy listening to music and making music. (Shameless Self-Advertising INCOMING) I make 8-bit music on Soundcloud, if you want to you can listen to it here: Link. I usually don't listen to very popular songs, I just listen to whatever I find, usually Soundtracks for Movies or Video Games. Speaking of which..
  • I play many Video Games. Probably too many. But I like games that require strategy and actual cognitive thinking to play. I really like old school games.
  • I procrastinate too much. I mean, I published this 5 min. before my lunch period ended on they day that this was due. (I'm currently talking about myself in past tense)

    Anyways, I need to go to English right now and show that I've put some effort into my homework, so... see ya!